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Dear Alan Knowles,

           Hello,

 

I appreciate for your continuous support for SVN packaging.

           I’m so appreciate that you giving continuous supports about svn package.

 

I am writing a mail because of 2 reason.

1. I am currently struggling with php7 – SVN package.

2. When would SVN package support PHP7?

           Anyway,

           I’m struggling with php7 – svn package.

When svn package going to support php7?

 

Please let me know when I would be able to use the package.

           Please let me know when I can use this package.

 

Thanks.

           Thanks

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